Montag, 8. September 2008

Nyambi The Creator




In the beginning Nyambi lived on earth with his wife, and his doughter, which he both created. For he was god he had to created all animals, fishes and birds and he did. However one thing he made diffrent was man.


The first man's name was Kamonu. This man copied all that nyambi did. He followed him all over and did all that Nyambi did. Man Copies god, that is what happens. One day Nyambi forged Iron tools, Kamonu forged iron tools as well, but kamonu thought that these sharp utensils were weapons. That is where it started, kamonu went out to kill with these weapons, and he killed and killed.


So Nyambi thought it was enough, he had to flee, kamonu was bothering him to much. So nyambi flead over the river, and kamonu came over with a raft. So nyambi and his family went up on the highest mountain, after two years kamonu reached them on the top. So Nyambi went to a seer, he said "You have to find spider he'll show you where to go, after you have to take out his eyes." So Nyambi went to spider and spider made a thread from earth all the way up to heaven. Nyambi stabbed out the spiders eyes so no one could find him and he and his family went up the thread up to heaven.


kamonu tried to get up to heaven. He and man built a huge pile with loggs and dirt and it almost reached heaven but then it fell together and Kamonu gave up. But now at every sunrise he greats nyambi. "There rises Nyambi, Our god has come!"

1 Kommentar:

Mister Doubt hat gesagt…

a) Be sure names are capitalised.

b) Edit your writing before you post. I think there are parts of this piece that you would alter, were you to read it again.

Mr. Doubt